The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar graph illustrates the outcome of a survey informing resident’s purchasing and consumption habits of
coffee
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and tea in 5 major
australian
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Australian
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cities
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which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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and Hobart.
Overall
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, people chose
going
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to go
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to
cafes
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for tea and
coffee
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is at
the
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its
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peak in almost all
cities
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.Except for
Adelaide
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where
residents
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prefer to buy instant
coffee
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.In
the
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all five
cities
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purchase of fresh
coffee
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is the lowest. Visiting
cafes
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for
the
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apply
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beverages in all
cities
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is
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are
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above the mark of 45
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percent
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per cent
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. The peak percentage in Melbourne at 64
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percent
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per cent
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followed by
hobart
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Hobart
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and Sydney.
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it
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the instant
coffee
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brought by
residents
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in Hobert is highest, just close to 55
percent
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Fresh
coffee
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was brought by
residents
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of
sydney
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Sydney
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and
melbourne
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Melbourne
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more than the other
cities
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which
are
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is
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bellow
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below
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40
percent
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. The
residents
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' preferences differ in each city;
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moreover
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moreover,
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they all have made visits to
cafes
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for
coffee
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and tea in the past 4 weeks ,
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Adelaide
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with Adelaide
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making an exception. The habit is followed by
spendings
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spending
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on instant
coffee
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.
In contrast
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, going to
cafes
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in
Adelaide
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.The least
prefer
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preferred
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habit is buying fresh
coffee
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in all 5
cities
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, adelaide, cafes, residents, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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