The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.
The graph depicts the number of
visitor
Change to a plural noun
visitors
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
for
touring Change preposition
apply
to
New Zealand between 5 countries; Australia, Change preposition
apply
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
UK
, Japan and China from 1996 to 2014, measured in New Zealand Correct article usage
the UK
dollar
.
Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Overall
, Australia had held the highest spot over Linking Words
period
Add an article
the period
a period
while
China was lowest. Interestingly, the figures show fluctuations.
Linking Words
To begin
with, the majority of Linking Words
visitors
Change noun form
visitors'
visitor's
spend money on
Australia increased rapidly until 2007 Replace the word
spending in
then
, decreased significantly in 2008, after Linking Words
that
the figureCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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