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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Ain

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Ain
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The diagram provides an algorithm
of
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for
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 producing recycled products.
Overall
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, there are 9 stages, some equipment and resources. The whole man-made and cyclical process starts with bringing
plastic
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bottles
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 and finishes with ready products. In the first stage, the process begins with the collection of used
plastic
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bottles
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 from recycling trash.
Then
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bottles
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 are transported by trucks to recycling stations, where they are manually sorted based on their types.
Following
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this
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, chosen
bottles
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compresses
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are compressed
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 into blocks to make them easier to crush.
Next,
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compressed
bottles
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crushed
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are crushed
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 into smaller pieces, which are
then
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 washed away to reduce their fitness. After
washing
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the washing
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 stage, clear
plastic
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 pieces
produced
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are produced
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 into
plastic
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 pallets to melt and heat them to raw material. These
plastic
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 pallets after heating are converted to raw materials for producing recycled products.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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