The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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Those two graphs illustrate the employment situation of students who graduated from one university with an anthropology degree. The pie chart presents the distribution of employment destinations
while
the table demonstrates the income level of Linking Words
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working in three different environments.
First of all, Use synonyms
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who are working full-time account for 52% of the employment destination, which is the largest category compared with the other five. Interestingly, even though the proportion of Use synonyms
people
who are taking both part-time work and postgraduate study only accounts for 5%, the sum of the graduates who are involved in a master's degree occupies 20% of the whole population. Use synonyms
Finally
, the number of unemployed graduates is 4% higher than those who only have a part-time job.
With five years of working experience, 50% of the government sector are more likely to earn a salary of more than $100,000, Linking Words
whereas
, only 40% of freelance consultants and 30% of private companies can access the same payment level. Linking Words
However
, for the income range between $25,000 - $49,999 and $50,000 - 74,999, both freelance consultants and the government sector demonstrate the same data, which are 5% and 15% respectively. Linking Words
Finally
, 35% of Linking Words
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employed by private companies gain income of $50,000 - 74,999.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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