The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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of revenue sources from tourism sectors in the

UK

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whereas

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the other graph explains why travellers go to

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region from 1980 to 2010.

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, the

tourists

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tourist

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expenditure in the

UK

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were experiencing

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experienced

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a variety of

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throughout the years

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most of them

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travel

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to the

UK

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caused

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holiday

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the holiday

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season.

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with, the growth of

visitors

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visitors'

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expenses

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until it reached

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the peak

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of €12,000

millions

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it

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dramatically

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to around €9,500

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in 2002.

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, the growth

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recovered to approximately €11,800 before it was dropped in 2010. On top of that, there

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four reasons

tourist

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tourists

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go to

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UK

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. First and foremost, they went

for

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on

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holiday totalling

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44.1% in 1980 and 39.1% in 2010.

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followed by, business and visiting friends or relatives representing

by

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20.7% and 18.7% in 1980

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it was increased to 22.8% and 28.2% in 2010, respectively.

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, other reasons

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contributed to 16.6% in 1980 and 9.8% in 2010.