The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
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The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
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, a species of large fish, showing the different stages of its growth and the locations where each stage occurs.
Overall
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, the process consists of three main stages, starting with the eggs in the upper
river
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and ending with the adult
salmon
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in the open sea.
Initially
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,
salmon
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eggs are laid among reeds and small stones in the upper
river
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, where the water flows slowly.
This
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stage lasts approximately 5 to 6 months. Once hatched, the young
salmon
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, known as fry, measure between 3 and 8cm in length. The fry
then
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moves to the lower
river
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, where the water flows faster, and they remain there for around 4 years as they continue to grow. During
this
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time, they develop into smolt, which are larger, measuring about 12 to 15cm. After spending several years in the
river
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, the smolt migrate to the open sea, where they mature into adult
salmon
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. At
this
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stage, they grow significantly, reaching a length of 70 to 76cm. The adult
salmon
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stay in the sea for about 5 years before returning to the upper
river
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to lay eggs and begin the cycle again.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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