The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
the amount of vegetables which were imported from Change the verb form
illustrate
Oman
and Use synonyms
Qatar
in 1990,Units are measured in Use synonyms
tons
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that Garlic was the highest vegetable Linking Words
in importing
in both Wrong verb form
imported
Oman
and Use synonyms
Qatar
, Use synonyms
while
the lowest vegetables in Linking Words
Use synonyms
oman
were Broccoli and Ginger. In Change the capitalization
Oman
Qatar
, Use synonyms
Peas
Use synonyms
was
the lowest vegetable Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in importing
.
The Correct word choice
imported
tons
of Garlic in Use synonyms
Oman
was 800 which was higher than Use synonyms
Qatar
which was only 340.Both two countries had the same Use synonyms
tons
of Ginger in selling , Use synonyms
while
there was a significant difference between Linking Words
Qatar
and Use synonyms
Oman
on Use synonyms
peas
, where Use synonyms
Qatar
was selling 150 Use synonyms
tons
of Use synonyms
peas
, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
Oman
Use synonyms
saled
400 Correct your spelling
sold
tons
of Use synonyms
peas
.
In terms of Broccoli, both of the countries had imported a gift amount of it , Use synonyms
Oman
imported 300 Use synonyms
tons
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Qatar
220 Use synonyms
tons
which Use synonyms
considered
to be the same amount.Add a missing verb
is considered
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oman, qatar, tons, peas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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