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The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps compare the view of the
college
Use synonyms
 campus in 2006 and now.
Overall
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, the principal difference between the
college
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 facilities in the past and the present days is now fewer trees and more buildings. Meanwhile, no new buildings have been built for lectures and lessons. In the past, the
college
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 was only easily accessible by car,
whereas
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, a new bus stop and a safe storage for bikes have been constructed now.
In addition
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 to the existing sports field, the new sports centre has been built in
a
Correct article usage
the
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 place of the former library. The library was relocated between the two
college
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 buildings, where the green area used to be. The new cafeteria building, a focal point, is constructed right in
a
Correct article usage
the
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 middle of the
college
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ground
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grounds
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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