The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is developing briefly in every single moment these days.

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lives

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improvement should be the most substantial purpose of

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.

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increasing the qualification of life and making it easier are what

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scientists are always attempting for,

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should not only be dedicated to

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and their

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.

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’ ambitions to adopt the most energy-saving and the least time-consuming approaches in all aspects of life have always

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the speed of

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improvement.

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,

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has basically developed

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people’s

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needs and has inevitably been in

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humans’

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service in any era.

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,

telephone

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was

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invented to tackle numerous problems of

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communications and gradually improved to

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cutting-edged

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form

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as

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, only to make staying in touch more

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accessible

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for people.

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can be a great reason to make plenty of us believe that the most important aim of

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should be to meet

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need

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and improve their

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, as it always has!

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, we are not the only living creatures

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planet

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should be considered. Despite the booming development in

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’

lives

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,

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is not always advantageous for the

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.

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, limitless use of sources and

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the nature because of

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calmness and comfort are what

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science

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sometimes does.

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,

humans

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have significantly had great developments in building satellites and spaceships which can dangerously lead to wandering of huge

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of debris around the

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’s orbits when they get broken and useless. What is more, there are a lot of new methods of agriculture which can produce many more different vegetables and fruits which may seem appealing at first glance but have

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impact on the atmosphere of the

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by producing a substantial amount of green gas.

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can not continue their developed

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in

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polluted air or drought

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which is damaged by themselves. so, the only and most important of

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should not be

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’

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.

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, the most important aim of

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should not only be to improve

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lives

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,

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but

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to protect the

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and its sources as

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are not able to do without them.