The line graph gives information about the number of people using four different Tv to watch from 1990 to 2010

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The line graph illustrates the usage of various

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to watch.

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it is clear that

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, the proportion of people using the Desktop to watch decreased

while

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reverse

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the reverse

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were

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true

other

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TVs albeit at varying rates. Looking at

biggest

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figures

first,

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The number of people using mobile

phone

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to watch

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stood out among other genres with

highest

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amount in 2009.

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, it was superseded

at the end

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of the period

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, There

5million

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indivuals

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individuals

watch

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who watch

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from

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their phone

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phone

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phones

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while

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Bug

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watchers only

2million

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2 million

. Between 1990 and 2000 the number of people using

the

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mobile

phone

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phones

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see

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watch

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decreased

noticeable

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while

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The figures for Bug

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and Host

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remained the same

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words tv with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

115 words

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The line graph gives information about the number of people using four different Tv to watch from 1990 to 2010

Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree oe disagree?

Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Postponement, or the act of delaying a task, has been cited in some research articles as one of the factors for poor academic performance by some university students. What are some of the reasons behind students procrastinating, and what measures can be taken to address the problem?

Some people think that the best way to broaden young people’s understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. do you agree or disagree?