The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the primary causes of productivity decline in agricultural lands,
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the table shows the impact of these causes on three regions: North America, Europe, and Oceania in the 1990s.
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Overall
, over-grazing and deforestation were the largest contributors to agricultural Linking Words
degradation
. European countries were the most affected, Use synonyms
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North America was the least impacted.
The largest cause of reduced productivity in agricultural lands is over-grazing, which accounts for 35%. Deforestation and over-cultivation Linking Words
also
contribute significantly, with nearly 30% and 28% of Linking Words
land
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degradation
, respectively. The smallest proportion is attributed to other causes, at just 7%.
In the 1990s, European countries were particularly affected by deforestation, which caused 9.8% of Use synonyms
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land
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degradation
. Over-cultivation and over-grazing Use synonyms
also
had a significant impact in Europe, contributing 7.7% and 5.5%, respectively, which together accounted for 23% of the total Linking Words
land
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degradation
. In North America, over-cultivation had the greatest effect, causing 3.3% of the Use synonyms
land
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degradation
, with the Use synonyms
overall
total being only 5%. Oceania, Linking Words
on the other hand
, was not significantly affected by over-cultLinking Words
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