The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates developments in the Westley region between 1815 and in present day.

Overall

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, the village transformed

buildings

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purposes from agriculture, forests, and traditional houses to modern city.

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with, there intersection road in

west

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the west

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area which the left sides go to a toll bridge above the river Twine

whereas

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the right

sides

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side

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was

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The Coach Inn.

Moreover

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this

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pave

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connected Westley with London in West Maps, Tinton Village in the north site,

as well as

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the six agricultural fields in the south-west.

Further

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, the area

nearby

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border

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Tinton

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the Tinton

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area

used

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is used

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building

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houses, trees, and

lake wonton

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Lake Wonton

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. Along the way the streets to the south, there were Church

then

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market

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a market

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square,

town

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a town

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hall, and houses. On top of that, nowadays, there is a new railway track and main railway station

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apply

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the opposite

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cinema which

dimished

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diminished

the farm areas

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toll

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the toll

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bridge.

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the top of the maps, it

transforming

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transformed

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land

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the land

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function from green areas and

house

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houses

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to tourist

accomodity

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accommodation

and

apartment

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apartments

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that, The Coach Inn was reconstructed

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into

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sports

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centre

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created museum building

which

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apply

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next to

this

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place.

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is followed by new

pave

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to the south areas and

also

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there are three sections which connected to west gate shopping centre. It is worth to north

while

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that historical buildings

such

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town

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the town

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hall and market square

still

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are still

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

233 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
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noticeable change
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