The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates developments in the Westley region between 1815 and in present day.
Overall
, the village transformed Linking Words
buildings
purposes from agriculture, forests, and traditional houses to modern city.
Change noun form
buildings'
building's
To begin
with, there intersection road in Linking Words
west
area which the left sides go to a toll bridge above the river Twine Add an article
the west
whereas
the right Linking Words
sides
Fix the agreement mistake
side
was
The Coach Inn. Wrong verb form
is
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
pave
connected Westley with London in West Maps, Tinton Village in the north site, Replace the word
pavement
as well as
the six agricultural fields in the south-west. Linking Words
Further
, the area Linking Words
nearby
Correct your spelling
near
border
of Correct article usage
the border
Tinton
area Correct article usage
the Tinton
used
to Add a missing verb
is used
building
houses, trees, and Replace the word
build
lake wonton
. Along the way the streets to the south, there were Church Correct your spelling
Lake Wonton
then
Linking Words
market
square, Correct article usage
a market
town
hall, and houses.
On top of that, nowadays, there is a new railway track and main railway station Correct article usage
a town
in
the opposite Change preposition
apply
of
cinema which Change preposition
apply
dimished
the farm areas Correct your spelling
diminished
as well as
Linking Words
toll
bridge. Correct article usage
the toll
Further
, Linking Words
in
the top of the maps, it Change preposition
at
transforming
Wrong verb form
transformed
land
function from green areas and Add an article
the land
house
to tourist Fix the agreement mistake
houses
accomodity
and Correct your spelling
accommodation
apartment
. Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
Besides
that, The Coach Inn was reconstructed Linking Words
to
Change preposition
into
sports
centre Correct article usage
a sports
also
created museum building Linking Words
which
next to Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
place. Linking Words
This
is followed by new Linking Words
pave
to the south areas and Change the form of the verb
paving
also
there are three sections which connected to west gate shopping centre. It is worth to north Linking Words
while
that historical buildings Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
town
hall and market square Correct article usage
the town
still
reserved by the community.Add a missing verb
are still
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, as well as, further".
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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