The map below show the changing frenton town in 1990 to 2012.

The map below show the changing frenton town in 1990 to 2012.
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The map illustrates the information about the layout of the town of Frenton from 1990 to 2012. After analysing the map, it can be seen clearly that in 1990 in the southwest
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, some trees were planted, and in 2012, they were replaced by technopark.
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, in the northwest
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, there was one school and bank and in 2007, the bank was converted into a restaurant. On the left side of the high street, there were some playing fields, a hospital and a library. But after 22 years, the hospital was made bigger and the playing fields were replaced by blocks of flats.
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, the maps collate that, houses were constructed in the east
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of the map in 1990. But in 2007, blocks of flats were built in that place.
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, new flats were constructed in 2007 in the north side
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and on the right side of the high street, there was one cafe and park in 1990. In 2007, it was replaced with a hotel and golf courses.
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, in the southeast, there were shops and theatres which were renamed with cinemas and supermarkets.
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,
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many modifications had
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taken place in the construction of Frentown town. Some people were changed and some remained the same in a given period.
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