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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars
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The line graph illustrates the commerce of three different kinds of
books
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 which are kids'
books
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, adult novels, and academic
books
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 from 2002 to 2006 in one country.
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 , We can see that in both adults, fiction and education written pages were fluctuating , they increased
then
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 decreased and so on.
However
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, we see a gradual increase in children's
books
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According to
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 the details of
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 chart, in 2002 adult fiction was the highest in sales which was 46
million
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 dollars but
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 of the
period
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 It became the lowest one
of
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 $30
million
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. Regarding the educational report, the sales started from $24
million
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 in 2002 and
then
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 went up and
then
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 went down and ended in 2006 with $32
million
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Moreover
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, the children's book began with only 32% which is the highest sales the educational book reached it .
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, it reached a peak in 2006 of more than $50
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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