The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. A
The table shows
percent
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per cent
about
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of
schools
types in four Change the noun form
school
section
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The table compares the four networks in each who go to the species Change to a plural noun
sections
school
. Use synonyms
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falls
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fall
school
systems Use synonyms
are
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apply
degreased
and each Correct your spelling
decreased
of
increased than the other systems.
The community Change preposition
apply
school
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this
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school
option Use synonyms
having
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has
rise
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risen
schools
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schools,
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