Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people? Support your opinion with reasoned and example from your own knowledge or experience.

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it is a commonly held belief that

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will make a better role for younger

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an argument that opposes it. In my

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I consider that important to development players.

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can sit up some roles.

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, these roles which helpful the

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to be good.

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the team.

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, some younger players have a distraction

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no good, because they need to focus on

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occurs by visual concentration. Another point the consider

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must be on younger team attention on their diet. It is

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possible to say that

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to arraignment some exercises for young players to start building muscle and improve their brain and

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concentration.

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the

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follow a

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diet

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because that contributes to

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and immune system.

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more protein like chicken, meat, fish, and big

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will help to improve

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of the

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. In conclusion, despite people having different views,

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believe that each sport kinds

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but some

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roles on

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to support their

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and give better performance.