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The graph below shos the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different countries in the U.S. State of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shos the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different countries in the U.S. State of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below shows the
population
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 change between 1940 and 2000 in three different towns in the U.S. state of Oregon.
Overall
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, It clearly saw that the
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 of dwellers in Washington increased the most from 1940 to 2000. The lowest
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 of
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 were Columbia citizens with a small improvement slightly increased in 1970 and significantly increased in 2000
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 the Yamahill citizens. To start, at the beginning, the
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 of those living in either Yamahil or Columbia country was not that different which accounted for at least 20
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 citizens compared to Washington which had the highest
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 of
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 at 75
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people
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. The
population
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 in Washington rose dramatically from 1970 to 2000, accounting for 122
thousand
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people
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 and 242
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people
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 respectively. Yamahil and Colombia
people
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 in 1970 reached 45
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people
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 and 32
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people
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 respectively which is a few differences
as well as
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 in 2000.
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, there was an increase in
people
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 significantly in both cities in 2000
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, number, thousand, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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