The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1992-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1992-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph displays how many
minutes
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(in billions) were spent on phone calls in the United Kingdom, shown by three groups, between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
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, national calls and international calls which were made by fixed line and mobile calls increased all over the years.
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, local calls were the most used type of calls for all 8 years in the UK. First of all, local calls were the most used kind compared with other call types.
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, it did not increase all over the period. It increased from 1995 to 1999 gradually by 18
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minutes
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. But it declined by the same amount until 2002. But still, it was in the first place throughout the years.
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, national and international fixed calls grew from around 37
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minutes
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to 60
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minutes
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between 1995 and 2002 respectively. Following that, mobile calls rose steadily from 1995 to 1999 by 10
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minutes
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.
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, it tripled in the year of 2002.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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