The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented bar chart compares data about the proportion of 4 various materials namely, plastic, cans, paper, and metal that were recycled in a city from 2000 to 2010.

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, it was important that the percentage of recycling climbed over the period of one decade.

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the diagram, plastic, the

last

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material in recycling all the time, reached 10% in the beginning;

thereafter

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, it rose moderately to approximately a quarter in 2010. Cans, having the highest portion of recycling their waste in 2000, hit just under 15% at first;

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they reduced slightly to the minimum point at roughly 10%.

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, it increased overwhelmingly to nearly one-third in 2010. The graph demonstrates that paper and metal scored almost the same fraction at just over 10% after that, metal leapt enormously to 40%, the main recycling item, in 2010.

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, another element went up significantly to just under 30% in 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

Percentage
Recycling rates
Type of waste
Decade
Increase / Decrease
Trends
Fluctuation
Comparison
Significant change
Observation
Underlying factors
Technological influences
Environmental impact
Societal influence
Waste management policies

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