IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line chart illustrates the proportion of Australian
expert
Fix the agreement mistake
experts
show examples
 to four
diffrent
Correct your spelling
different
 countries for the
period
Use synonyms
 between 1990-2012.
Overall
Linking Words
,China after being one of the least
need to
Replace the word
needed
show examples
expert
Fix the agreement mistake
experts
show examples
 in 2012 dominant with the highest number.
While
Linking Words
Japan
Change noun form
Japan's
show examples
percentage
Use synonyms
remain
Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
show examples
 mostly stable,The United
State
Fix the agreement mistake
States
show examples
 and
India
Change noun form
India's
show examples
Use synonyms
percentage
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
show examples
fluctuact
Correct your spelling
fluctuates
 during
given
Add an article
the given
show examples
period
Use synonyms
.
To begin
Linking Words
 with,India was the least needed for
eperts
Correct your spelling
experts
 for the
period
Use synonyms
 between 1990 to 2008 ,
then
Linking Words
 the proportion rose gradually with peaks of 8%
then
Linking Words
 back decreased . China on the other
hands
Fix the agreement mistake
hand
show examples
,the need increased slowly between 1990 to 2000,
furthermore
Linking Words
 , the
percentage
Use synonyms
 increased sharply to reach
Correct article usage
a peaks
show examples
peaks
Fix the agreement mistake
peak
show examples
 of 30% in 2012. China was the
most
Correct quantifier usage
apply
show examples
country
Correct pronoun usage
that require
show examples
require
Wrong verb form
required
show examples
 experts. The United
State
Replace the word
States
show examples
percentage
Use synonyms
 keep fluctuate between 1990 and 2003
then
Linking Words
 decreased gradually during the rest of giving
period
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
,
Japan
Change noun form
Japan's
show examples
 needs decreased from being the main
required
Replace the word
requirement
show examples
 for
expert
Fix the agreement mistake
experts
show examples
 in 1990 with 27% to the second position in 2012
for
Change preposition
with
show examples
 18%.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, percentage with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: