The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
consumption
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of three types of meat and seafood in European countries from 1979 and 2004.
Overall
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, the figure for all meals experienced different trends in the time period.
While
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the
consumption
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of beef and lamb decreased gradually, the eating of chicken rose steadily.
However
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, the eating of fish stayed stable with some fluctuations during these years. As the graph shows, the use of beef began at approximately 210
grams
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in 1979 followed by a small decline to around 180
grams
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in 1980 but by 1984 there was a significant increase from about 180
grams
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to 240
grams
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.
Then
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, it dropped steadily with fluctuations until it fell to over about 125
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in 2004.The eating of lamb started at 150
grams
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in 1979 followed by a small decrease to around 120
grams
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in 1982.
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it
subsequently
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drops with some ups and downs to just over 70
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.When it comes to the
consumption
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of chicken, it started at around 150
grams
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in 1979.And it experienced considerable growth with variations from 150
grams
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to 250
grams
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in 2004.
By contrast
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, fish
consumption
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began at about 65
grams
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in 1979. It remained relatively stable with some fluctuations, reaching 40
grams
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by 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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