the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart shows data about the
families
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family's
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weekly expenditure, in 8 different categories, in one special country in 1968 and 2018.
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, what stands out from the graph is that most of the money was spent on Food in 1968,
while
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,
this
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place was for Leisure, in 2018. In 1968, 35% of each
families'
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earning
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was spent on Food, which was ranked first. Housing, and Clothing and
footware
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footwear
were tied with one-tenth. Third place was for Leisure with around 9%.
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, with a slight difference were Household
goods
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, Personal
goods
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, and Transport with approximately 8%. The least amount of money was spent on Fuel and power with just under 5%. Looking at the pattern of spending in 2018, the rate of expenditure of Food, Clothing and
footware
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footwear
, and Personal
goods
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halved with around 16%, 10% and 4%, respectively.
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, the cost of Housing, Transport and Leisure doubled
with
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approximately 18%, 14% and 23%, respectively.
This
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number stayed the same
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Household
goods
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but, lowered by 2%
on
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Fuel and power.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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