Email is a fast and convenient way to communicate, and written letters aren’t needed anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,

people

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are

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find it

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convenient to communicate with electronic mail

due to

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its speed

to reach

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the receiver so they

stop

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have stopped

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using written

letter

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letters

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The email

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could be read in seconds after being sent. I agree with that statement. I prefer to use

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better than written

one

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. On the

one

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hand,

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the email

an email

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could be received really

quick

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quickly

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. With

one

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click, as long as the internet is fast, the mail

that is

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sent will arrive instantly. It has other

fitur

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features

such

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as attaching other documents or pictures at the same time.

People

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find it really helpful to communicate with others in

the

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apply

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far away

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faraway

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places. It connects

community

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communities

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around the world. With

this

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technology, distance is not a problem anymore. Office workers

even

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and even

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enterpreneurs

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entrepreneurs

utilize it to expand their

bussiness

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business

so they

could

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can

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widen their networking.

Moreover

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not only be written with

computer

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the computer

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but

also

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by handphone.

People

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could use

this

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wherever they are.

On the other hand

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, written

letters

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consumes

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much more time. The

letters

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are

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apply

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needed to

get

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collected from many counters, get the stamps, and the post office

staffs

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staff

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would sort

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sorted

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all of them

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then

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and then

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send

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sent

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them to

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the receiver. Some need three days or even

one

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week to reach the reader and of

course

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many

people

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are involved from the first step to the final. On top of that,

wet

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the wet

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season could be challenging for the

post man

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postman

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to distribute the

letters

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. Rain sometimes

destroy

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destroys

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them so

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they

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will not be in good condition once

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they

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arrived

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arrive

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the

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their

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destination.

However

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, written

letters

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are needed in some circumstances when the documents should be in the original form with

sign

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a sign

the sign

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conclusion,

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is the best choice to communicate. Technology is improving

alot

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a lot

so it could decrease the barriers for society to connect

each

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to each

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other. Written

letters

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are only used in certain

condition

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conditions

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and arguments are fully developed. Avoid redundancy to keep readers engaged and focus on discussing different facets of the topic.

Task Achievement

There should be more specific examples to enhance your arguments.

Coherence & Cohesion

Transition signals can be better utilized to guide the reader through your text smoothly, with a more varied and fluid use.

Task Achievement

The essay explicitly addresses the prompt and takes a clear stance early on, indicating a structured approach.

Coherence & Cohesion

There is a logical sequence of ideas from introduction to conclusion, maintaining a flowing narrative, though it can still be refined.

Task Achievement

The essay lays out contrasting points about email and written letters effectively, showing an understanding of the topic's scope.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
38
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

304 words

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