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The graph below shows the consumption of fisha and some different kind of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 .

The graph below shows the consumption of fisha and some different kind of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 .
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The line graph gives information about the consumption of meat and fish in a European country between 1979 and 2004 . Units are measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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 , the consumption of beef and lamb decreased over the period given ,
while
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 for chicken increased. During these years , fish stayed steady . At the beginning of the period , beef was the most used but , by the end , chicken was most popular . Regarding the amount of beef used , it began at 210
grams
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 and peaked at 240
grams
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 in 1984 and fell dramatically to about over 100
grams
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 in the
last
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year
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.
Likewise
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 , 150
grams
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 of lamb were eaten in the first
year
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 , after which the figure fluctuated slightly and decreased to a low of about 80
grams
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 in the final
year
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 .
On the other hand
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 , the chicken was the third with beyond 150
grams
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 , after which the figure swung a little and increased to a top of 250
grams
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 in the final
year
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 . The consumption of fish used about over 50
grams
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 ,
while
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 these years it was eaten a little and decreased to beyond 50
grams
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 in 2004 .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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