The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pictorial description depicts the two planned locations for the school in the
town
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of Canterbury.
Overall
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, the second site is located in the heart of the
town
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whereas
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the first location is situated in the nearby countryside
area
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. To commence with, site one which is closer to the urban
area
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is planned to the east of the
town
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centre
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which is at the
centre
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of the
town
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and is no traffic
area
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.
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, site two is just at the southern edge of the
town
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centre
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.
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, the
town
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centre
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is connected with the main road. There is a village to the southwest which has a population of 4500 and is 7 km
to
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from
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Chartham. Probing
further
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,
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town
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the town
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centre
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is 5 km
to
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from
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Sturry having
population
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a population
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density of 7000.
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, there is
also
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a university to the north of the
town
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centre
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which
also
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share
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shares
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its location with the
outskirt
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outskirts
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of the
town
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. The housing
area
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surrounded
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surrounds
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the
town
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centre
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and covers the major part of the.
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Also
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Also,
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the countryside
area
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is covering all the directions of the
town
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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