The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The image illustrates how to turn
recycle
waste into a compost fertilizer.
Wrong verb form
recycled
Overall
, what stands out from that image is that the process takes Linking Words
up
six months to be completed and it Change preposition
apply
is compost
by five stages.
Looking at the first step, all you need to have to start recycling your waste is a plastic container with 2m3, and you need to cut the Change the verb form
is composted
is composting
bottle
in four little spots, two little cuts in the upper, and two little cuts in the lower Use synonyms
bottle
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
oppositive
sides. The second step is to add 15 cm of food and grassReplace the word
opposite
,
and cover it with a little bit of newspaper.
Moving to the third step, nitrogen and hot water Remove the comma
apply
needs
to be add it in the Change the verb form
need
bottle
. Once you finish Use synonyms
this
part, you are required to close the Linking Words
bottle
with a lid. It will take Use synonyms
up
around six months to finish the process, in the meantime, the nitrogen and hot water will be reacting with the organic waste and the Change preposition
apply
oxigen
coming from the little holes that Correct your spelling
oxygen
has being
made. Wrong verb form
have been
After
Linking Words
this
period, you will be able to get your compost and start gardening.Linking Words
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