The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The image illustrates how to turn
recycle
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waste into a compost fertilizer.
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, what stands out from that image is that the process takes
up
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apply
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six months to be completed and it
is compost
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is composted
is composting
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by five stages. Looking at the first step, all you need to have to start recycling your waste is a plastic container with 2m3, and you need to cut the
bottle
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in four little spots, two little cuts in the upper, and two little cuts in the lower
bottle
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in
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on
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oppositive
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sides. The second step is to add 15 cm of food and grass
,
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and cover it with a little bit of newspaper. Moving to the third step, nitrogen and hot water
needs
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to be add it in the
bottle
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. Once you finish
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part, you are required to close the
bottle
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with a lid. It will take
up
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around six months to finish the process, in the meantime, the nitrogen and hot water will be reacting with the organic waste and the
oxigen
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oxygen
coming from the little holes that
has being
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have been
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made.
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this
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period, you will be able to get your compost and start gardening.
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