The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs below provide details about where and what kinds of
dance
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classes
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adolescents in an Australian town are now participating in.
Overall
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, private studios are the most prevalent venue for
dance
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classes
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,
while
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school halls rank second. Private studios dominate as the primary venue, accounting for nearly half of all
dance
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class locations. School halls, used after school hours, are the second most popular choice with 24 %.Community halls and other spaces are visited by 18% of
classes
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,
while
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college-based studios are the least common place for dances
due to
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it's
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their
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10% rate. The data categorizes
classes
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by age group : under 11 and 11–16 to three
type
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types
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of dances namely, ballet, tap and modern. Almost (600
from
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out of
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900) 
all
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apply
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off
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juviniles
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juveniles
who are going to ballet are under 11 years old. Those children(under 11 and 11-16) who are attending tap are
stadely
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steadily
the same
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for
aproximately
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approximately
450 and roughly 430, respectively. 510
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youth
yourth
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youth
that are older than 11 and
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younger
longer
yon her
yonher
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younger
than 16 years participating in modern
dance
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compare to those 300
deancers
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dancers
dealers
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younger
longer
yonger
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younger
than 11

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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