Some people believe that everyone has right to university education. Therefore, government should make university education free for eyeryone, no matter what their financial bockground is. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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, if they made the free for everyone, it would negatively
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of the country,
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it is one of the biggest
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a little bit cheaper than
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cost, because in some countries it is over-priced, and human simply cannot study, even
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high level of
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intelligence, so result of
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many
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cannot apply to the university knowing the reason. Well, I just do not know how to react
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that, because it would not happen. The
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can work, and study at the same time,
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, they have already created a "Grand" for
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society, it is free at all, for the native
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of the country, and who leaves
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abroad
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human may call, the big support for
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, and agree with the
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government
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studing
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studying
free, or not.
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure that your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion to provide a comprehensive response to the task. Consider clearly stating your position at the beginning and summarizing your points at the end.
logical structure
Try to improve the essay's logical structure by organizing your ideas more clearly into paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or aspect of your argument.
relevant specific examples
Include more specific examples or evidence to support your main points. This will enhance the task achievement by illustrating your arguments more effectively.
task achievement
You demonstrate a good understanding of the topic and have evaluated the complexities involved in making university education free for everyone.
task achievement
Your essay attempts to address multiple perspectives and considerations, such as the financial impact on government and society.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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