The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart showed the information related to the
age
of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child over three periods (1966, 1986, and 2006).
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, in 1966 the highest percentage of first-child birthing in the 19-24 Linking Words
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illustrated differently for the 1986 Use synonyms
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which showed around 50%. the Use synonyms
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dominating the first-child Use synonyms
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