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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs display data about the
number
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 of
hours
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 that university
students
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study
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 each day.
Overall
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,
students
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study
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in
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 the
weekdays
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 more than the weekends. C
students
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 are the highest in
the
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study
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 time
in
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weekdays
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 and D
students
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 are the lowest in both.
A
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Students
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 are the highest in the
number
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 of
study
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hours
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in
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at
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 weekends. Most of the
students
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 who
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in
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weekdays
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 are C
students
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 with 10.6
hours
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 per day and B
students
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 are the second highest with 10.1
hours
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. A, D and E
students
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study
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 for 9.8, 9.6 and 10
in
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weekdays
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 relatively and D
are
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 the lowest in the
number
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 of
hours
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 they
stud
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study
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. On the weekends,
students
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 A
study
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 for 9
hours
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 every year which is the highest among all the others. B pupils remain the second highest. C,D and E
students
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study
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 for 7.8, 5.6 and 6.2
hours
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 each day relatively and D pupils still
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 lowest
in
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apply
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the
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apply
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study
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hours
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number
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, students, study, weekdays with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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