The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates information about the percentage of changing
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price
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prices
copper
, nickel, and Use synonyms
zinc
during Use synonyms
2014
period. Correct article usage
the 2014
Overall
, the percentage of nickel Linking Words
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price
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prices
extremly
rose and fell Correct your spelling
extremely
down
during Change preposition
apply
this
year.
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While
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that of Remove the comma
apply
nickle
and Correct your spelling
nickel
zinc
consistently remained around a narrow range.Use synonyms
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Price
of Correct article usage
The price
copper
stayed positive at Use synonyms
the
high point Correct article usage
a
around
6% Change preposition
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on
January Change preposition
in
then
fell dramatically to around 1% by March and remained Linking Words
steadily
around 1% to -0.5% Change the word
steady
around
2 months Change preposition
for around
then
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droped
sharply to -3% by June. It increased more than double and remained Correct your spelling
dropped
constantly
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constant
to
around -1% until dropped slightly to -2% by October and grew back to positive around 1% by November and remained Change preposition
apply
unchange
until December.
The percentage of Correct your spelling
unchanged
price
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changing
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changes
copper
and Use synonyms
zinc
are quite narrow. That of Use synonyms
zinc
rose from 1% to 3% between January and Use synonyms
Febuary
and Correct your spelling
February
then
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drop
steadily to around 1% by May. It fell to -1% Wrong verb form
dropped
on
June and grew marginally to -0.5% Change preposition
in
remained
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around
3 months. It Change preposition
for around
droped
to -1% again Correct your spelling
dropped
on
October and surged to Change preposition
in
aound
2% by December.
That of Correct your spelling
around
copper
fluctuated between 2% and 0% starting at 2% Use synonyms
on
Jan and slightly dropped to 0% in the middle of the year and rose to around 1% the month after. It remained in the bracket between -0.5% and 1.5% until the end of the year.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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