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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph displays the total number of
minutes
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, measured in billions, spent on three categories of telephone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002. The categories include local
fixed-line
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, national and international
fixed-line
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 and mobile calls.
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, local
fixed-line
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 calls were the most used category throughout the period, peaking in 1999. National and international
fixed-line
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 calls showed steady growth,
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 mobile meetings eventually neared the usage levels of national and international calls by 2002. In 1995, local
fixed-line
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 calls accounted for the largest share, with approximately 72
billion
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minutes
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, followed by national and worldwide
fixed-line
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 calls at 38
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minutes
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. Over the next four years, the use of regional calls increased steadily, reaching its highest point in 1999 at just under 90
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minutes
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.
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,
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 dropped to around 70
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minutes
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 by 2002. National and international
fixed-line
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 calls grew consistently, starting at 38
billion
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minutes
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 in 1995, and they rose to 61
billion
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 by 2002. By 2002, mobile calls had reached approximately 45
billion
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minutes
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.
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