The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

graph

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below illustrates to monthly waves of

copper

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nickel

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, and

zinc

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's total prices

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while

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2014.

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, the

graph

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has 12

month

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months

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, and begin of the

yearthe

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year

rates of materials have

a huge gaps

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huge gaps

a huge gap

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among

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apply

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Nickel

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is higger than others.

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contrast

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contrast,

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zinc

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is lowest, if

compare

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compared

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nickel

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and

copper

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. Rather

than

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apply

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copper

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middle

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of them. In the

middle

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of the

graph

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nickel

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and

copper

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's rates are so close but

zinc

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have

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has

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a big space between others.

Finally

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, the three elements are almost

same

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the same

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numbers.

Firstly

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nickel

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the nickel

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price's

rise's

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rise

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percentage is

highest

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the highest

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level if

examine

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examined

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others, it is %6.

On the other

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hand

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hand,

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copper

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and

zinc

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' amounts are so close and they have a %1

differences

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difference

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. From

begin

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beginning

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middle

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the middle

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of the

graph

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has

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a steadly

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steadly

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steadily

steady

decrease

about

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all of them. We can notice

that

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apply

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nickel

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's percentage is under

the

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apply

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zero,

while

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zinc

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has not

shift

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shifted

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on the

graph

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also

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copper

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has a growth

nearly

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of nearly

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half

percentage

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a percentage

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Secondly

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, between

july

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July

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september

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September

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, there

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are

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no changes. The lines are

stabile

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stable

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although

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nickel

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is under

the

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apply

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both

them

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of them

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there

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are

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%-1

changes

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change

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zinc

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and zinc

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the

middle

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position between %0 - %-1.

copper

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is on the top. In the end, all of them are so close they are around %1 - %2.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, copper, nickel, zinc, middle with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

214 words

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out abour the history about house or building they live in. What are reason for this? how can people research it?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?