The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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below illustrates to monthly waves of

copper

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,

nickel

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, and

zinc

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's total prices

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while

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in

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2014.

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, the

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has 12

month

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months

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, and begin of the

yearthe

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year

rates of materials have

a huge gaps

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huge gaps

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among

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apply

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.

Nickel

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is higger than others.

In

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contrast

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contrast,

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zinc

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is lowest, if

compare

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to

nickel

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and

copper

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. Rather

than

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apply

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,

copper

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is

middle

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of them. In the

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of the

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,

nickel

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and

copper

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's rates are so close but

zinc

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have

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a big space between others.

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, the three elements are almost

same

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the same

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numbers.

Firstly

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,

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nickel

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the nickel

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price's

rise's

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rise

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percentage is

highest

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the highest

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level if

examine

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examined

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to

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by

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others, it is %6.

On the other

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hand

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copper

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and

zinc

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' amounts are so close and they have a %1

differences

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difference

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. From

begin

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middle

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the middle

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of the

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has

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a steadly

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steadly

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steadily

steady

decrease

about

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in

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all of them. We can notice

that

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is

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nickel

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's percentage is under

the

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apply

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zero,

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,

zinc

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has not

shift

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on the

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,

also

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copper

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has a growth

nearly

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of nearly

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half

percentage

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a percentage

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.

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, between

july

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July

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to

september

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September

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, there

is

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no changes. The lines are

stabile

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stable

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,

although

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nickel

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is under

the

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apply

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both

them

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of them

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there

is

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are

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%-1

changes

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change

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,

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zinc

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and zinc

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is

on

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in

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the

middle

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position between %0 - %-1.

copper

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is on the top. In the end, all of them are so close they are around %1 - %2.