You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour .. You have not been able to speak to the neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter: • explain the problem • suggest a solution • say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear John, Hi,how are you doing? , hope

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everything is going well.

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I'm trying to contact you, but

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I have

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not been able to reach you. I

do'nt

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don't

know how I can express

this

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issue to you in

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the face

a face

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face to face

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conversation, so I decided to write

this

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letter to you.

Firstly

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my basement door is on your side in front of your backyard, where you placed your

garbage

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bins

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. The main issue

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am facing is that its odour

smell

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for

whole

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the whole

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day. many times

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saw the lids of your

bins

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are not properly closed because of overfilling.

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, I noticed in my CCTV

camras

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cameras

, many times during

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the nights

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nights

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night

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, the nightmare animals taking

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garbage

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the garbage

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out from your

bins

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becauseof

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because of

improper closing lids. What

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want to suggest you

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that

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if their lids are broken

then

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please try to replace them. If

on the other

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hand

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hand,

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you have more

garbage

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then

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than

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your bin's capacity you can ask

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garbage

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the garbage

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society to give you new or extra

bins

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. As a

neibour

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neighbour

, it is my first

responsability

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responsibility

to inform you before taking any

further

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action. So,

its

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my request please try to solve

this

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issue as soon as possible.

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Otherwise

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I will

sooncontact

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soon contact

muncipal coopration

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municipal cooperation

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problam

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problem

. Hope so , you will understand my concerns and act

upon

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accordingly

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. your best

wisher

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wishes

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preet

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Coherence

Improve coherence by ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the text easier to follow.

Writing Tone

Maintain a consistent writing tone throughout the letter, especially in the introduction and conclusion.

Grammar

Proofread to fix minor grammar and spelling errors to enhance clarity.

Task Achievement

The letter addresses all required elements: explaining the problem, suggesting a solution, and proposing further action.

Writing Tone

The tone is mostly friendly and neighborly, suitable for addressing a neighbor.

Greeting and Closing

Starts appropriately with a greeting and ends with a closing that reflects the relationship.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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