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The tables below give information abou sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information abou sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the table shows the amount of sales of coffee and bananas Fairtrade-labelled in the
UK
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,Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and ,
Sweden
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 in the period 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
UK
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 was at the top of sold bananas
as well as
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 coffee in 1999/ 2004 followed by Switzerland ,
while
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 the least countries could be seen in Denmark and
Sweden
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 in both years .
According to
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 the data given , in 1999 the
UK
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 was selling around 1.5
million
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 of coffee and
then
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 increased significantly to 20
million
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 in 2004 .
However
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,
Sweden
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 had about 0.8
million
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 in 1999 and reached 1 in 2004 which slightly went up compared to the
UK
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 . Regarding sold bananas , the
UK
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 had the highest number in 1999 and climbed to almost double the number to 47
million
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 .
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, Sewizland and Denmark slightly rose to roughly 4/ 5.5 in2004 .
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Belgium and
Sweden
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 declined from 1.8 - 2 to 1- 0.9

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, sweden, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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