The graph below shows the average daily spending of three categories of international visitors to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the data obtained from Linking Words
the
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apply
internetional
Correct your spelling
international
travelers
to New Zealand and their daily Change the spelling
travellers
spendings
ratio between the years 1997 to 2017.
Change the noun form
spending
Overall
, all the categories experienced fluctuations. Linking Words
While
Linking Words
spendings
Correct your spelling
spending
for
business Change preposition
on
were
the highest, visiting friends and relatives were the lowest.
Looking at the data in greater detail, the biggest gap was between business and friend Correct subject-verb agreement
was
visitings
. At the beginning of the period, the money Correct your spelling
visiting
spend
for business was the highest with approximately 260 Wrong verb form
spent
dollars
. Use synonyms
This
amount increased for Linking Words
few
years. Correct article usage
a few
However
, it dropped significantly to 180 Linking Words
dollars
. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, it peaked again after 2010 and decreased rapidly.
It is noticeable thatLinking Words
,
all of the types of spending first ascended for a Remove the comma
apply
while
, Linking Words
then
started to decrease and had surges. Linking Words
For instance
, the figure for holiday Linking Words
spendings
rose to nearly 280 Fix the agreement mistake
spending
dollars
but dropped rapidly in the middle of Use synonyms
2000s
to 200 Correct article usage
the 2000s
dollars
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, all of the categories experienced Linking Words
upwards
and Correct your spelling
upward
downwards
throughout the given years. Correct your spelling
downward
Furthermore
, except for its peak, the money Linking Words
spend
on visiting peers and family moderately declined.
In summary, every category had Wrong verb form
spent
unstable
amount of money.Add an article
the unstable
an unstable
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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