The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented maps illustrate alternatives that have happened in Stromer town from 1995 to the present.
Overall
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, it is important that the number of people and the city amenities increase
while
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the vegetation is reduced.
According to
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the diagrams, in the beginning, one road connected the north to the south;
then
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now the figure of paths rises;
moreover
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, in both times, the green land, in the west, did not change .
In addition
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, these days, big farmland, in the south of the city, is replaced by small farmland, in the south-east, and 4 sectors of apartments, 3 various
shops
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and houses. The pictures demonstrate that in the centre of
this
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area, a woodland, at the east, and
shops
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, at the north, do not alter;
However
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, nowadays, old Houses are changed by
shops
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and new
shops
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and schools are established. In the north, today, they replaced houses with flats and a new airport.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • residential buildings
  • green spaces
  • commercial areas
  • shopping mall
  • parking facilities
  • river
  • marina
  • tourism
  • leisure activities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • roads
  • roundabout
  • access
  • industrial area
  • community center
  • town square
  • residents
  • social interaction
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