The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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The map illustrates the rural community called Ryemouth in 1995 and the advancement of

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village at present. It is clearly observed that there are significant changes during

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period. Some recreational facilities

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as golf, tennis courts and

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new accommodations have been constructed. Looking at the map of the village in 1995, there was farmland in the northeast of the area and

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there was a forest park next to the farmland. in the northwest of the settlement, there were some houses alongside the road. On the downside of the village, there were plenty of fish markets near the fishing port and on the opposite of these, the rows of shops were located.

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, a hotel and café were built in the southeast of the area. At present, the farmland has gone and been converted into a golf court . The forest park has been demolished and replaced by a tennis court.

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, the shops have been knocked down and new restaurants have been built.

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, all fish markets have been replaced with new apartments. The hotel and café remained unchanged. A New car park has been constructed next to the hotel.

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, new housing has been added to the residential areas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

204 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
Renovation
Expansion
Demolition
Construction
Accessibility
Public transport
Urbanization
Evolution
Gentrification

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

As a result of global warming, many countries are turning to nuclear power instead of burning fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas. What are the advantages and disadvantages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe they are entitled to all the money they earn, to spend everything on themselves, instead of paying part of their salaries in taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples.

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