the diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

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The picture illustrates the stages involved in producing a biofuel named Ethanol.

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cycle

process

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involves 8 steps from giving

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carbon

dioxide to plantation to reproducing it. First of all, plants and

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use the sunlight and carbon

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dioxide

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the air in order to grow. Once these grown

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are harvested by a farmer with a

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truck

, they are

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put into a pre-processing machine. The final product of its

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is Cellulose.

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cellulose is sent for some chemical

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in some

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laboratories

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stage, by using some chemicals, microbes are added to existing sugars in the cellulose.

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process

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leads to producing Ethanol, the biofuel which is used by cars, airplanes and, lorries for moving.

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, people use these vehicles daily, which results in making

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exhaust

and polluting the air. These

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exhausts

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contain carbon dioxide emissions too which

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used by plants and

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cycle continues.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biomass
ethanol
fermentation
microorganisms
yeast
carbon dioxide
distillation
purification
dehydration
raw materials
storage
distribution
renewable energy
greenhouse gas emissions
sustainable fuel
concentration
impurities
alcohol content
crop growth
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the diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

Many people are doing their shopping on the Internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

Some people say that school education is not useful and the essence of study can be acquired at home. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Some people believe that non-academic subjects at school should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are required to make people recycle more if their waste?