The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.

The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
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The line graph demonstrates the rate of vehicle registration of commercial vehicle types from 1970 to 2010.
Overall
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, three vehicles went
through
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up and down during the period presented in the graph. Looking at the graph more closely,
it is clear that
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truck
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dominates
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except around
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1980.
Truck
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was almost at 50 in 1970 and started to drop substantially by 20% in 1980. And
then
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, it rose gradually and reached
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around 45% in 2010.
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,
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experienced more fluctuations during the period. It soared by approximately 10% from 1970 during a decade. After peaking at about 35% in 1980, it decreased gradually
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but skyrocketed again to the peak of 35%.
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bus
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had the weakest volume
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three
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the three
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types of vehicles. It increased from 5% in 1970 to nearly 15% in 1980.
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, it ended up declining and reached
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almost zero in 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • vehicle registrations
  • commercial vehicles
  • share
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • growth
  • decline
  • advances in technology
  • economic conditions
  • government policy
  • logistics
  • transportation needs
  • industry standards
  • environmental impact
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