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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries.
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The bar chart compares
tea
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 and coffee imports in
Canada
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, the
UK
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, the
USA
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, and
Germany
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 in 2007.
Overall
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,
tea
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 was the most beverage imported in the
UK
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 and
USA
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,
while
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 coffee was the largest import in
Canada
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 and
Germany
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. As the chart shows,
Canada
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 imported 80,000
tonnes
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 of coffee , the most of any country.And
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UK
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the UK
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 imported 20,000
tonnes
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 which was the smallest of any country.The
USA
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 and
Germany
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 imported similar
tonnes
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 with 40,000 and 45,000 respectively. When it comes to imports of
tea
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, the
UK
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 was dominated with 160,000
tonnes
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.The
USA
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 took second place in the import of
tea
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 with 120,000
tonnes
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.
Germany
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 and
Canada
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 imported a little same
tonnes
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 with 40,000 and 20,000 respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, canada, uk, usa, germany, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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