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The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of overseas
graduates
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 from UK universities namely
London
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, Cardiff,
Bristol
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, bath,
oxford
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, and
Cambridge
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 from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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,
London
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,
Oxford
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, and
Cambridge
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 had the greatest
number
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 of
graduates
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 in 2015.
Whereas
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, in 2000, had a lost
number
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 of
graduates
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 in
London
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,
Bristol
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, and Bath.
To begin
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 with,
London
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,
Oxford
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, and
Cambridge
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 had the largest
number
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 of
graduates
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 in 2015, around 20%, 25%, and 24%, respectively.
Moreover
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, Cardiff had around 15%, and Bath had about 13%. Meanwhile,
Bristol
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 witnessed a loss of about 9% in the proportion of
graduates
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.
Oxford
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 and
Cambridge
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 almost had the same
number
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 of
graduates
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 in 2000, around 15% and 14%. The most interesting difference is that
Bristol
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 and
London
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 saw the same
number
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, approximately 6% in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, london, bristol, oxford, cambridge, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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