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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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The above table represents the
sales
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 of fair trade-labelled
coffee
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 and bananas among five European
countries
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 and measured in millions of
euros
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.
To begin
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 with,
coffee
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sales
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 in five major
countries
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 the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden increased their
sales
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 enormously from 1999 to 2004. In the UK
sales
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 have skyrocketed to 18.5
euros
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 comparing those two years and
accordingly
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, there is no loss for
coffee
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sales
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 among all other
countries
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. In Switzerland, Banana production has increased by 32 folds from 15
euros
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 to 47
euros
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 but in Belgium, there is a downfall in banana
sales
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 of about 0.8
euros
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 and in
Denmark
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Denmark,
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 there is a huge drop from 2
euros
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 to 0.9
euros
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 from the year 1999 to 2004. In conclusion, fair trade revealed that
coffee
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 rapidly increased from 1999 to 2004
whereas
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 Banana
sales
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 declined in a few European
countries
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, countries, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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