The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

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The diagram depicts the process of generating energy from coal.

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, the procedure begins with the combination of coal and oxygen in the furnace and culminates with producing electricity after various chemical stages.

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, transported fossil fuel by a van is heated in the furnace with oxygen, releasing unwanted slags through the bottom outlet.

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the extracted raw syngas

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a specific process to remove harmful substances

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as carbon dioxide, Mercury and Sulfur, before the purified syngas are utilised to power the gas turbine for energy production, which is

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directed to electrical sources. At

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stage, the gas turbine transfers the hot exhaust of gases to the heat recovery steam generator in another direction, which releases flue gases into the atmosphere, for cleansing the gas. Once steam is generated by heating in a facility, it moves through the steam turbine to create electrical power in the generator.

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, the electricity is sent to the central power station for public consumption.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

162 words

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The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or is it the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of goods?

Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people, while others are unsure. What is your opinion?

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.