The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates how regularly men and women living in Australia participated in physical activities in the year 2010.
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, female participation peaked in the 45-54
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bracket, at 53.3%. Men's was highest among the youngsters belonging to
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group, at 52.8%. It is
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noteworthy that a higher proportion of females stayed physically active than men throughout all
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bands except the youngest. 47.7% of females took regular exercise in the lowest
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bracket. Their participation
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went up with the increasing dotage, reaching its peak at 53.3%. Their engagement went down dramatically to 47.1% in the oldest life category of over-65 Male participation reached its peak among those in their mid-teens and mid-twenties, at 52.8. The proportion began to go down drastically with the increase in
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, reaching its lowest point in the 35-44
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band, at 39.5%, before climbing to 46.7% among 65-over.
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rate was almost close to that of females in the same life group.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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