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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries(%). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries(%). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented table compares data about the percentage of water
that is
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 utilised in 3 various sections namely, Domestic
use
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,
industry
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, and
agriculture
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 in 4 different areas that are Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand, and Canada.
Overall
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, it is important that in Canada and New Zealand, most water is for
Industry
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, but other countries utilize it for their farming.
According to
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 the chart, Egypt is a country where
agriculture
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 needs a lot of water owing to the fact that it composes 82%;
moreover
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,
this
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 sector has the maximum proportion among other areas;
then
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Industry
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 and Domestic
use
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 makes up roughly the same fraction at 10%.
In addition
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, Saudi Arabia forms 64% of farms, 30% of
industry
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 and the lowest portion among other countries for domestic
use
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 at 6%. The graph demonstrates that New Zealand constituted nearly the same portion for its
industry
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 and
Agriculture
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 at approximately 45%;
furthermore
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, it reported 10% for domestic
use
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. Canada, the country that hit the highest percentage of
industry
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 and domestic
use
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 among countries, makes up 70% of
industry
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, 20% of domestic
use
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 and just 10% of
agriculture
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, industry, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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