The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the consumption of strawberry, lemon, and cherry
jam
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in a specific country in Asia, from 1991 to 2014.
Overall
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, it is evident that in Asian countries the traditional use of strawberry and lemon
jam
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decreased over time,
while
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cherry
jam
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was newly introduced and gained significant popularity in a short period of time and became number one.
To begin
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with, in the year 1991, strawberry
jam
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was the most used
jam
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with the sell of approximately 145
tons
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, which peaked at 160
tons
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in 1996, it experienced a dramatic decrease up to nearly 45
tons
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in 2014 and it became the second most sold.
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, the cherry
jam
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was newly produced in the year 2006 with just some
tons
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, which peaked at nearly 90
tons
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in 2011,despite experiencing some drop, it secured the number one position with sales of close to under 80
tons
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.
However
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, lemon
jam
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was the second most popular
jam
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with the sale of nearly 90
tons
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which experienced some fluctuation but remained over 80
tons
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until 2011, before reaching
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its
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lowest point in 2014 with just 40
tons
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, and securing the
last
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position.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words jam, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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