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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world.

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Nowadays, many
countries
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 produce
food
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 worldwide, and people can buy any
food
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 they like from local markets. I believe
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 is a positive development because citizens could have the opportunity to try
food
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 from different
countries
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, which would increase the economy between these
countries
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. The development of
food
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 supply around the world
have
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 a significant benefit on the community. People now have the chance to try
food
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 from different
countries
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while
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 they are
on
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 their
countries
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.
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, international students can find their traditional
food
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 in the supermarket so
easly
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easily
.
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, I remember when I went to the United States to study and I found supermarkets
provide
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 products from my country
such
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 as cheese and tea and all these
kind
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kinds
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 of products are made
from
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by
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local
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a local
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company
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companies
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. Another thing to consider is
produced
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that producing
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food
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 can raise the economy between
countries
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 around the world and
food
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 companies will work harder to offer the products to people.
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, prices will go down because there is competition between local and international companies
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 more quality and sales will happen.
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, more options
of
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for
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food
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 will be in the markets and consumers will have their own choices. In conclusion, more options
of
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for
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 produced
food
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 in the markets and economic benefits and strong
relationship
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relationships
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this
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 is why I believe it is a positive development.

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