many
like to live with their family in their hometown
they study, others prefer to travel to a different city to attend
. Despite of obvious benefits of moving away from family
as greater independence, there are
a significant number of disadvantages
as lack of support and care. In my opinion, the disadvantages
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the advantages by a large margin.
Living without family in a different town would allow
to experience greater freedom. They will learn to live their own life and to make responsible decisions.
will help them to gain maturity as they learn to handle different circumstances with their own intelligence.
, they can
taste the essence of a different culture and environment, and learn to modify their lifestyles
to blend with the native people.
, a recent article in the 'Live
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Life' magazine claimed that
living independently were at least 60% more successful
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to their career
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a different city than
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.
, living alone means that there will be
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distractions from young or newborn family members, and
the
can better focus on their academics.
, living independently has numerous notable disadvantages. Family members often provide significant care, and moving away from them results in much less support being available.
,
are faced with additional responsibilities
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all the other academic duties.
, close family ties are necessary for mental stability and happiness, and a lack of
results in a feeling of homesickness and mood swings that
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a negative impact on the
's performance. In
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scenarios, if there is an accident, it becomes extremely difficult for a
to cope
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without the presence of their family members.
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research carried out by the National
's Bureau of Statistics revealed that one out of ten
living alone in a new city, have to drop out and return to their family
serious injury from road accidents.
In conclusion, even though living independently
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may lead to an increased capability of adapting to career requirements, homesickness, mental instability and threats of undesirable accidents make it more advantageous to stay with family as they can provide the
with an umbrella of support and care whenever necessary.