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The charts below gives information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016.

The charts below gives information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016.
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The pie charts show the reasons
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 flights from four different airports in 2016 in the UK.
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 visiting friends and family was the most popular purpose in
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every airport except Gatwick,
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 reasons category was the least widespread among visitors. The highest percentage of
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 who used airlines
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 holidays experienced Gatwick at 54%
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 the results were approximately
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 in other airports at probably 35%.The amount number of individuals
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 aim was to meet
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 close people was the largest in Luton at 50%.
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Stansted was the second
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airport at 48%, Heathrow and Gatwick stats were at 37% and 30% respectively.Business purposes were in
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third place
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 the list. Their largest status was in
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Heathrow at 25%
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 in other airports their proportions were nearly two times lower.Regarding other plans, humans used them only a few times. Their peak was in the Heathrow at only 4%.

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